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Dodoitsu Poem for the Japanese Poetry Club

A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry

Caribbean Cruise

by Gypsy Blue Rose

Caribbean Cruise goes down    

on a thunderous morning   

  far away from the seashore—

hungry sharks’ fast food

 





This poem is for the Japanese Poetry Club. Everyone is welcome to join. if you would like to join click here then click on RESERVE SPOT and then click on SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY.

Dodoitsu is a Japanese poetic form developed towards the end of the Edo period (1603 to 1867) about any theme. Form: four lines with 7-7-7-5 syllables and no rhyme for a total of 26 syllables. The tone and structure derives from Japanese folk song traditions. The dodoitsu often focuses on love or work with a comical twist but you can use any topic you like. The title can be anything you like.

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Gypsy

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Club entry for the "DODOITSU POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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