General Poetry posted May 30, 2024


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Sedoka Poem

Sea Breathes

by Wils

 
Breathing in the air
The ocean scent hits my nose
Sending shivers through my bones
 
Squelch of sandy shores
As my feet sink deep below
Sea wetness seems far away

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Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
For this challenge you will write a sedoka.
This is a Japanese form that consists of two unrhymed poems that MAY show the same scene from two different perspectives or angles.
Each one has a syllable count of 5/5/7

Here's an example:

The cat's meowing
Pleads her case convincingly
Hunger gleams in golden eyes

Missus Smith's tutting
Suggests the cat's been eating
Far too much for her own good
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