Young Adult Fiction posted May 20, 2024


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Turned down for the prom, but...

Next Best Thing

by HarryT


Jonathan clutched a long stem rose, stomach in knots. Susie was by her locker, wearing her cheerleader outfit.

"Hi Susie," he whispered, “How bout prom?” His hand shaking, holding a long stem rose.

 "Oh, Jon, that's sweet. But I'm going with Harry."

Jon faced flushed bright red. He pulled the rose back. "Oh, I should have known, the quarterback.”

Susie squeezed his arm, “I’m sorry.”

Jon nodded, a lump forming in his throat and managed to say, “At least take the rose.”

Susie said, “Thank you. Ask me for a date.”

“How about next Saturday?”

“I’d like that.” Susie said.




Flash 100 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a flash fiction story. But you can only use 100 words. Exactly. Title does not count in the word count.


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