General Poetry posted May 9, 2024 | Chapters: | ...107 108 -109- 110... |
Senryu Suite (for rules ck my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku
Touching Venus
by Gypsy Blue Rose
Dreaming....
touching Venus I dreamt of reaching the stars but I missed ~€~
and I fell on your lap like a little girl bouncing on your knees ~€~
then I danced for you with my old friend, the handsome moon
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"Though my soul may set in darkness,
it will rise in perfect light;
I have loved the stars too fondly,
to be fearful of the night" -Sarah Williams
SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. Classic Senryu tends to be satirical or humorous. In the 17th century, when it was created, men sat outside taverns writing rather racy senryu about women ... such as limericks
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. it will rise in perfect light;
I have loved the stars too fondly,
to be fearful of the night" -Sarah Williams
SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. Classic Senryu tends to be satirical or humorous. In the 17th century, when it was created, men sat outside taverns writing rather racy senryu about women ... such as limericks
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
pictures from my pinterest account
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