General Poetry posted April 29, 2024


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
our present betrayal

Enemies Of Our Household

by jim vecchio

We were not vigilant
Lord, betrayed we have been
Enemies ransomed us
Our schools are full of sin

We have welcomed our foes
And have shaped our own fate
Laws and rules, tossed aside
-A new order of Hate

We forgave many debts
And welcomed one and all
Betrayers now answer
Disobedience’s call

History is remade
Daily with momentum
Instructors, prejudiced
Our schools full of venom

There is no place to learn
In this hate-filled tide
We lost sight of our goals
Where, Oh Lord, can we hide?


Write A Review


Betrayal writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem in any form or style with Betrayal as the central theme.


Through the years, we have allowed false teachers and enemies of our country's freedoms to dominate our campuses. Now, the situation is very contrary to the sacrificial work begun by our Founding Fathers.
Matthew 10:36: ...A man's foes shall be they of his own household...
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. jim vecchio All rights reserved.
jim vecchio has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.