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 General Poetry posted April 14, 2024


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What does heaven look like?

Is This Heaven?

by Brenda Strauser

Marie remembered an exquisite dream where clouds opened up and displayed an awe-inspiring spectacle

Her eyes gazed upon gold plated steps leading her to a mysterious, secret place

She gazed upon an enchanted garden steeped in plushness and opulence, so unbelievable

Lanterns of light flooded the path with their glow and she smelled the sweet fragrance of honeysuckle

The shimmering moon highlighted the glittering stars 

The stunning birds were chirping beautiful songs

Magnificent angel-like creatures floating among the clouds led her to an artic blue waterfall streaked with silver. 

Feelings of calmness and love consumed her

From the depths of her soul, she felt peace and wondered if this is Heaven?

 

 
 


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