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Spring Haiku (for rules ck my author notes)

A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Outside Boxing Gym

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Haiku Club, please check my author notes
 
 
   outside boxing gym—

champion snowdrops

push on through
 
 
 


 




- snowdrops are one of the first spring flowers to bloom and some grow beneath the snow and push on through to the surface.

- Kigo: end of snow is spring click here if you want to see kigo (season words) list

HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, enlightening the reader and making an insightful connection. English Haiku doesn't follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succinctly as possible and 17 syllables or less.

The main parts of a classic haiku are: kireji, kigo, and satori.

KIREJI is a pause or breaks in a verse where one phrase ends and another phrase begins. It may be expressed by a dash or a comma.

KIGO is word or phrase associated with a particular season (spring, summer, autumn, or winter)

SATORI is a phrase (usually last line) that provides comprehension and understanding. It refers to a deep experience of one's essence of true nature". Satori is commonly translated as enlightenment,

click here to read haiku examples

click here to read haiku rules


click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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Club entry for the "USE A KIGO" event in "HAIKU CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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