Romance Poetry posted March 20, 2024 Chapters:  ...32 33 -34- 35... 


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Gogyohka Poem Suite {using five senses}

A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Free Verse

~* My Beloved *~

by Gypsy Blue Rose

my beloved,

I see myself in your eyes

and look into the deep end

of your creek clear soul
 
resting on beds of calm sea



my beloved,

I taste our union

on your alluring lips
 
and feel your warming touch

of a thousand splendid suns
 

 

my beloved,

I want to touch your skin

to make sure you are here
 
with me on our bed

where we know each other
 

 

my beloved,
 
we play and laugh

through fields of golden barley

the scent of fertile ground

tangled with desire


 
 
 

 

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Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

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