General Poetry posted February 24, 2024


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My special girlfriend

Bottoms Up!

by Terry Reilly

She's Louise. My Squeeze!

Big tease. Eats bees! Shares my fleas.

Knobbly knees. Climbs trees!



Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a humorous 5-7-5. It must have 3 lines. The first line has 5 syllables, second line has 7 syllables and the third line has 5 syllables, ending with 17 total syllables. No other rules apply. Have fun and make your readers laugh.


Apologies, folks. She can a bit tricky at times. I tried to persuade her to smile at the camera - Say Cheese, Louise - but she insisted on showing off what she says is her best feature. Even when I said: Please, Louise. I will never understand women.
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