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Horror Tanka
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Tanka

Frigid Marble Tomb

by Gypsy Blue Rose


for Dean, tanka rules in author notes
 
frigid marble tomb

veiled with midnight black shawl

  bejewelled with stars—

owl asks who's the poor soul

as crickets serenade the silence
 
 




Dean Kuch and I wrote a book of horror haiku. Whenever I write horror poems I think of him.

Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed five-line poem with 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines. The syllable count is 31 syllables OR LESS because Japanese syllables (called 'on') are shorter sounds than English syllables. The third line is usually used to transition from the top descriptive lines to the image-focused reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love.


click here if you want to read modern tanka examples


click here to read Tanka Society of America


click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.

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