General Fiction posted February 7, 2024


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Who knew she had talent?

Cry Me A River

by jim vecchio


She was a timid, shy, lame Plain Jane.

I beat on her now and then.

Maury let her go on stage one night. Strictly for laughs.

How was I to know this gal could sing? She wowed that audience!

This girl just wouldn’t listen to me anymore.

She was a caterpillar, wanting to be a butterfly.

The dame walked out on me.

Ten years later, she was headlining at the Copa.

I ran straight onstage, squeezed her tightly. I begged.

“Baby! Come back to me! I cried a river over you!”

“I wouldn’t cry a puddle over you!” she laughed.

-100 words!




100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story in just 100 words. If so, this is your opportunity to shine. The story can be about any subject you wish, creative approaches are of course encouraged. All stories must have the following: Main Character, Setting, Conflict, Resolution.


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