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Yamato Uta Poem
A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry
Why Am I Unlovable?
by Gypsy Blue Rose
words definitions and Yamato-Uta rules in my author notes
you will never know
how much I love you and how it hurts to feel unlovable
go ahead, pierce my heart with your cold touch and your ambivalence even in my dreams you vacillate to be my man and seem to be incapable to appreciate who I am why am I so unlovable?
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vacillate = to waver in mind or opinion; be indecisive or irresolute
ambivalent = having mixed feelings or contradictory ideas about someone.
Yamato Uta is an unrhymed free verse type of Japanese poetry. The poem is not rhymed and it can be as long as you like. It was created by poets during Japan's Heian Period 700 century. As with all Japanese poetry, keep it as succinct as possible with word imagery, easy to visualize. You can write about any subject. "Yamato-Uta is composed of the many words born from people's hearts, as leaves grow from seeds". The people use these words dexterously to express their thoughts and feelings about what they see or hear." wikipedia
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem,
Gypsy
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Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. ambivalent = having mixed feelings or contradictory ideas about someone.
Yamato Uta is an unrhymed free verse type of Japanese poetry. The poem is not rhymed and it can be as long as you like. It was created by poets during Japan's Heian Period 700 century. As with all Japanese poetry, keep it as succinct as possible with word imagery, easy to visualize. You can write about any subject. "Yamato-Uta is composed of the many words born from people's hearts, as leaves grow from seeds". The people use these words dexterously to express their thoughts and feelings about what they see or hear." wikipedia
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem,
Gypsy
pictures from Pinterest
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