A creepy one for a change ... hehehe

POEM
heartless murder
perched on a bared bough
plan a heinous crime
as a nest of kittens play
unattended


= NEST is a group of rabbits, baby rabbits are called KITTENS

= A group of CROWS is called a MURDER

= CROWS eat almost anything, including small mammals.

Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem having about 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines. The syllable count is 31 syllables OR LESS. Japanese use a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure but English are usually less syllables than that because Japanese syllables are shorter than English syllables. The third line is usually used to transition from the top descriptive lines to the image-focused reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love.

click here if you want to read modern tanka examples

click here to read Tanka Society of America

click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.

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