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Gogyohka Poem Suite
A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry
Our Eternal Love
by Gypsy Blue Rose
the sun forgot us yesterday
on the cold and windy shore we cuddled by ocean whispers and the fire of our souls to keep us warm and there your body breaded in sand gave birth to this poem I just planted the seed of our eternal love  |
All low caps and no punctuation on purpose.
Man point of view
Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
pictures from pinterest
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