Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 29, 2024


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the news gives me the blues

Infinite Sadness

by jake cosmos aller

Every morning as the sun comes up,

I turn on the daily news.

While drinking my hot

Snarling cup of coffee,

Contemplating the state of the world.

Watching the endless gloom and doom,

I am soon overwhelmed by it all

I feel the blues washing over me.

As I am filled with infinite sadness,

And incipient madness,

And impotent rage burning up.

Watching the world burns,

Watching the politicians lying.

Doing nothing to stop

The carnage in the streets

Or combat climate change.

But they instead play

Endless cynical blame games

Offering useless prayers.

To the gun ghosts.

The climate change ghosts.

The fire ghosts.

The war ghosts overseas.

Consumed with this sadness,

Incipient madness,

Burning impotent rage,

I turn off the TV.

Listening to the blues

Wash over me.

Soon my good mood

Improves.

As I look at my wife,

The love of my life

And realize,

Everything will be fine

As long

As we have each other.

The infinite sadness,

The incipient madness,

the impotent rage,

goes away.

Soon replaced with

Infinite love.




Sad Poems writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Sadness has overcome us all at one time or another. Either caused by a relative or close friend's death or from the girl or guy that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Your poem can also play into other emotions that are common to writing like this such as anger or depression.


Sad Poems
Sadness has overcome us all at one time or another. Either caused by a relative or close friend's death or from the girl or guy that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Your poem can also play into other emotions that are common to writing like this such as anger or depression.

the stanza break did not work due to Fan story editing issues. Would appreciate if anyone has a tip to help deal with this common editing problem.


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