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Yamato Uta Poem

A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry

the Silver Moon in your Eyes

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Japanese Poetry Club, please check my author notes
 
 
 
you smile and I see myself

on the silver moon in your eyes

our gazes intertwine



your love is woven with mine

veiled with a quilt of stars

to keep us warm in the cold night



we sit at the end of time

where all that is and all that was

merges as one



we sit on sparkling grains of sand

caressed by aqua waves and sea foam

from time to time



the wind pours down the cliff

bringing the scent of the ocean to us

and the air glows with saffron light
 
 
 


 



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This week we are writing a YAMATO UTA POEM in the Japanese Poetry Club.

Yamato uta is an unrhymed free verse type of Japanese poetry. FORM: Free verse means there are no rules, the poem is not rhymed and it can be as long as you like. It was created by poets during the Heian Period 700 century. As with all Japanese poetry, keep it as succinct as possible with word imagery, easy to visualize. Most are about nature but you can use any subject you like.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Club entry for the "YAMATO UTA POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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