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Couple Tanka Suite (rules in my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Tanka

~ My Yearning ~

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
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my yearning

is too strong to keep

within bounds—

and our desire overflows

into the ocean of love
 



I'll wait for you

every night where Venus reigns

   amidst wishing stars —

we'll share the universe

in our timeless cobalt sky
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 




Couple Tanka is based on the original Tanka poems that were written between lovers. She writes one and her lover writes the response.

Tanka is my favorite Japanese poetic form. It's a romantic and passionate poem. It was created in the 8th century and used in the Japanese Imperial Court where lovers exchanged a tanka after a night together. The best tanka poets are women. I feel a kinship with these women tanka poets. After all this time, is still relatable.
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Rules: Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem having about 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines. The syllable count is 31 syllables OR LESS. Japanese use a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure but English are usually less syllables than that because Japanese syllables are shorter than English syllables. The third line is usually used to transition from the top descriptive lines to the image-focused reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love.


click here if you want to read modern tanka examples

click here to read Tanka Society of America

click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."

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