General Poetry posted December 29, 2023


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At least it was a warm day

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by BlueMarble

He died - He's dead and gone
Pushed me away - said I couldn't tag along
First time he ever did something like that
Feet first out the door without even a hat'
I'm glad it was warm that spring like day
Because naked he was when they drove him away.
Didn't even wear a tie,
Is that how you dress when you die?

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