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Gogyohka Poem Suite
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Tanka
On the Fringe of Faith
by Gypsy Blue Rose
smothered by loneliness
in the empty dark home she looks through the window to lovers passing by hand in hand they don't realize what they have entangled in happiness on the fringe of faith in a sea of love her bare skin remembers what it was like to belong completely with heart and soul dipped in trust but that was ages ago he left her without a word until they crossed paths her heart beating fast he said, "it's not you" bs now all she has is watching love from afar still waiting for him pretending he just forgot his way home  |
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Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia
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