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Senryu (rules in my author notes)

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Haiku

Dead Leaves

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

 

dad rakes dead leaves

in the front yard—

wind wins

 

 




SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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