General Fiction posted December 23, 2023


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A Peek At A Creek

by jim vecchio


Farmer Odell’s beautiful wife wanted flowers. He asked the wishing creek, and flowers appeared.

Then, a mink stole. The creek came through. Same for a stereo, and luxurious wardrobe. Next, a new home.

 The creek had enough. It swallowed him alive.

Poor Odell! Should’ve known “Beware of Creeks Bearing Gifts!”

-50 words




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