Romance Poetry posted December 17, 2023 Chapters:  ...83 84 -85- 86... 


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Tanka (for rules please ck my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Tanka

Opposites Attract

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
waves break again and again

    against seashore rocks—

yearning for long walks

hand and hand with the sun

through golden fields of barley
 
 




Some lovers seek what they are not, like waves yearning for land.

Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem having about 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines. The syllable count is 31 syllables OR LESS. The first English poets who wrote tanka imitated the Japanese models of a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure resulting in Tanka poems that were too long in comparison to Japanese tanka because Japanese syllables are shorter than English syllables. The third line transitions from the descriptive and image-focused beginning lines into a reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.

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