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Love Sedoka (for rules please see my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Clubs
I will Wait for You
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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I will wait for you
at the edge of summer dusk. Will you come to share the night? I will come, my love, you are the air in my lungs. I'll embrace you until dawn.  |
A Love Sedoka: is a Japanese unrhymed love poem that was created in the 8th century. FORM: 5/7/7 - 5/7/7. In the first verse (5/7/7) one lover poses a question to another. The second verse (5/7/7) is the lover's reply.
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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
more information about Sedoka and Katauta
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Club entry for the "LOVE SEDOKA" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB". Locate a writing club.
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