General Poetry posted December 16, 2023


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tanaga potlatch entry

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by dragonpoet

The heavens are a vast home
To those whose hearts like to roam
Far above the earthly loam
Among mounts of divine dome

To those moved to fly like birds
At a pilot's direct words
To places that others purred
About; said it'd be absurd

No to move among the mist
So paradise won't be missed
And true inner peace is kissed
In nature's beauty and bliss

Only to wish in a week
With newly sun-kissed tan cheeks
And a heart that's newly meek
To a home you'll ever seek




a tanaga is
untitled
any number of quatrains.
seven syllable per line.
the original tanaga was aaaa bbbb cccc etc
The modern one can use any rhyme scheme

Club entry for the "the tanaga poetry form" event in "The Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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