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Tanka for the Contest

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Tanka

Love Poems

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
I'll send you love poems

carried on southbound clouds

beneath the full moon—

my heart dipped in lonesome dew

and paper damped with tears
 
 
 
 
 
 



Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry

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Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem having about 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines. The syllable count is 31 syllables OR LESS. The first English poets who wrote tanka imitated the Japanese models of a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure resulting in Tanka poems that were too long in comparison to Japanese tanka because Japanese syllables are shorter than English syllables. The third line transitions from the descriptive and image-focused beginning lines into a reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.

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