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Korean Sijo Poem for Helen's (lyenochka) Birthday

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Free Verse

Herald of Peace

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
She is the Best Writer and Friend
 
 
 
~€~
 
quick to forget unkind words
she's a herald of peace
among angered friends
 
~€~

her interviews are
dusted with humor and wit
 
~€~

she lives by her faith
shares Christ's peace and love
talks the talk, walks the walk
 
~€~
 
 
 
She is my Best Friend
 
 
 
 
 




Today is Helen's Birthday and I wrote this poem for her. She is the kindest friend I have. I love her very much. She always prays for me and my family whenever I need it, with the most beautiful prayers. But she doesn't need an introduction, you all know her and know how wonderful she is.

SIJO poem is a traditional Korean poetic form related to haiku and tanka. Sijo is comprised of 44-46 syllables. Themes can be romantic, metaphysical, reflection, or spiritual. Originally it was written in four lines but it�???�??�?�¢??s okay to write it in more. FIRST STANZA IS THEME: 3,4,4,4; SECOND STANZA IS ELABORATION: 3,4,4,4; THIRD STANZA IS COUNTER THEME: 3,5.; FOURTH STANZA IS COMPLETION: 4,3

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

painting is Korean folk art from pinterest
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