General Fiction posted November 9, 2023


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No one believed him

The mouse elephant

by Joanne Gill-Maddick


 
 While walking through the forest one day I encountered a mouse.  He was no ordinary mouse he had a long trunk.  He was walking through the forest making elephant sounds and swinging his trunk.
 
 The mouse met up with a moose.  The moose said hello little mouse! Why are you making sounds like an elephant?The mouse said I am a elephant.  The moose said you silly mouse and walked away.  
 
This mouse really believed he was an elephant.  Next he met up with a deer.  The deer said hello mouse why are you acting like an elephant?The mouse replied, I am an elephant.  The deer said you silly mouse and walked away.
 
 Next he met up with a rabbit.  Rabbit said hello mouse why are you acting like an elephant?The mouse replied, I am an elephant but no one believes me.  Rabbit said I believe you.  



Mouse Elephant writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a fun flash fiction in 100 to 150 words about a mouse that thinks it's an elephant.


The tiny mouse believed he was an elephant and he finally met someone who believe him.
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