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Senryu
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Our Park Bench
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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sitting at our park bench,
on your side— a pile of fallen leaves |
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SENRYU is a Japanese poem with a title that deepens its meaning. Senryu is similar to Haiku but It's about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in three lines with 17 syllables or less. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori.
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