General Poetry posted November 3, 2023 | Chapters: | ...94 95 -96- 97... |
Haiku
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Dusk Over the Valley
by Gypsy Blue Rose
dusk over the valley,
last warmth cuddles— in the flowers |
HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. It originated in the thirteenth century and was mastered a century later by Matsuo Basho. Haiku is about nature and how humans relate to it. It alludes to a season of the year. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS because English syllables are longer than Japanese syllables. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation.
Sources:
click here to read haiku examples by the Haiku Society of America
click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES
click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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click here to read haiku examples by the Haiku Society of America
click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES
click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
pictures from pinterest
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