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Sijo for the Japanese Poetry Club
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Clubs
Warm Southern Sea
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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Did the warm Southern Sea
touch your cheeks? Did it caress your face with love? I lie in a bed of roses dreaming about our last kiss. We are a flash of light amidst eternal dreams.  |
SIJO poem is a traditional Korean poetic form related to haiku and tanka. Sijo is comprised of 44-46 syllables. Themes can be romantic, metaphysical, reflection, or spiritual. Originally it was written in four lines but it's okay to write it in more. THE FIRST STANZA IS THEME: 3,4,4,4; THE SECOND STANZA IS ELABORATION: 3,4,4,4; THE THIRD STANZA IS COUNTER THEME: 3,5.; THE FOURTH STANZA IS COMPLETION: 4,3
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
picture from pinterest
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
picture from pinterest
Club entry for the "SIJO POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB". Locate a writing club.
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