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Summer Haiku (rules in author notes)

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Haiku

Lovers Meet

by Gypsy Blue Rose


if you like to join the haiku club, check my author notes
 
lovers meet

    where the sun kisses the sea—

blushing sky
 
 

 




"The secrets of the sea are forgotten at the seashore."- Giorgos Seferis


HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. It originated in the thirteenth century and was mastered a century later by Matsuo Basho.


Haiku is about nature and how humans relate to it. It alludes to a season of the year. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS because English syllables are longer than Japanese syllables. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation.


Haiku Information:


click here to read haiku examples by the Haiku Society of America


click here to read Haiku Society of America haiku rules


click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule


Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.


Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis


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Club entry for the "BODY OF WATER HAIKU" event in "HAIKU CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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