General Fiction posted October 27, 2023


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Prisoner

Venus Landing

by Wils


 

Twenty seconds…

I count down as I struggle to break free. Stupid plant and its stickiness. I have been told since I was young to stay away from those.

Fifteen seconds...

It won’t be long now. The flower was so pretty I just forgot myself for a moment. Now my poor children will be fatherless. I hope they, at least, learn something from my stupidity.

Five seconds…

I was only trying to be a good grasshop…

SNAP!

Help, is anyone there? If you feel curious, please open this plant and release me. If he must eat, I hope he regurgitates.




The Prisoner writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
In 100 words, or less, write a short story--not necessarily a flash-fiction, though it could be--on the theme/subject/topic of 'prisoner'. It could be literal or metaphoric.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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