Romance Poetry posted October 15, 2023 Chapters:  ...54 55 -56- 57... 


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Gogyohka 5 Lines Poem
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Tanka

~ Drops of Jupiter ~

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

 

my soul soars

across the universe

searching for your love

seduced by Venus and Jupiter

covered in stardust and dreams of you

 

 


 
 
 




"Drops of Jupiter" Title is the name of a song by Train. The poem doesn't have anything to do with the song.

Gogyohka is a 5 Lines Poem similar to tanka but with no restriction to syllables count; however it should be as succinct as possible.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
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