Romance Poetry posted October 15, 2023 Chapters:  ...8 9 -10- 11... 


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Busso Poem

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Clubs

Touching at Sunset

by Gypsy Blue Rose


poem in black font in my author notes
Touching at Sunset
 
 
touching at sunset,

when bloodroots close for the night,

    consumed by yearning —

by morning you will be gone

and leave me cocooned, again,

on your warm side of the bed
 
 
 



 
 

 




Bloodroot flowers are early spring bloomers found growing wild in the sun in wooded areas. The close-up at night produces beautiful solitary flowers.

POEM IN BLACK FONT
touching at sunset,
when bloodroots close for the night,
consumed by yearning â??
by morning you will be gone
and leave me cocooned, again,
on your warm side of the bed

BUSSO BUSSO (Bussokusekika) is an old rare form of Japanese poetry that consists of six lines written in a 5-7-5-7-7-7 syllables pattern. Created in the 8th century and was written from 710 to 1185. They are usually written about religion or philosophical beliefs but contemporary Busso can be any subject. source

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

pictures from pinterest


Club entry for the "BUSSO POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Gypsy Blue Rose All rights reserved. Registered copyright with FanStory.
Gypsy Blue Rose has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.