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Senryu for the Haiku Club

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Clubs

The Rose

by Gypsy Blue Rose


For My Crush

 

   empty coffer—

I offer you all I have

a precious rose and love

 





4/7/6 syllables

SENRYU is a Japanese poem with a title that deepens its meaning. Senryu is similar to Haiku but It's about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in three lines with 17 syllables or less. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori.

for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America

Thank you for reading my poem,

Gypsy

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