| Horror and Thriller Poetry posted September 27, 2023 | Chapters: |
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Senryu Suite with one line refrains
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Haiku
I'm a Creep
by Gypsy Blue Rose
For Dean
here in the shadows
I die slowly day by day knowing deep inside you don't even know my name I follow you step by step to catch a glimpse
of your beautiful face
you don't even know my name but I'm a creep and no one you would care
to know well
you don't even know my name I wonder what would take for you to turn around
and see Me at last
you don't even know my name the voice inside me tells me what to do with you l will grab a gun and I will be the last thing you see  |
I woke up in the middle of the night and this poem came to mind.
Getting ready for Halloween, another creepy poem ... hehehe.
I used a senryu suite and one line refrain
SENRYU is a Japanese poem with a title that deepens its meaning. Senryu is similar to Haiku but It's about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in three lines with 17 syllables or less. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori.
for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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Gypsy
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and 2 member cents. Getting ready for Halloween, another creepy poem ... hehehe.
I used a senryu suite and one line refrain
SENRYU is a Japanese poem with a title that deepens its meaning. Senryu is similar to Haiku but It's about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in three lines with 17 syllables or less. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori.
for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
pictures from pinterest
Gypsy
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