General Poetry posted September 24, 2023 Chapters:  ...5 6 -7- 8... 


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Kojiki 5/7/5 - 5/7/5 - 7/7/7 for Japanese Poetry Club

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Clubs

Waiting for a Call

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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I’m not getting out

      of my wicked bed today —

the sun shines outside

 

but my room is dark

  and it’s only God and I

waiting for the call 

 

    that I know will never come —

it’s just me and the empty

pill bottles midst love poems

 

 

 





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KOJIKI is the oldest poetic form that dates back to 712. It's divided into three parts: upper 5/7/5 - middle 5/7/5 - lower 7/7/7 syllables. Originally, the theme was history and mythology but for modern Kojiku you can use any theme. It uses a kigo (seasonal reference) ; click here to see list of seasons ; wikipedia

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Club entry for the "KOJIKI POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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