Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 16, 2023


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A kindnesses received is the best surprise of all.

Surprise

by HarryT

 
Secretly give an unexpected gift
Sweet gift from someone that you know and love
Surprise from a friend can be playful fun
Sometimes, however, they are not pleasant
Shocks and scares can happen big or little
Stirring our hearts with foreboding and fear
Simple kindness received is best of all
 
 
 

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Pleiades Poetry writing prompt entry
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Write a Pleiades poem for this contest. This poetry type requires a title with a single word. The poem itself has seven lines. The first word in each line begins with the same letter as the title. See an example of this type of poem here.
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