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Haiku

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Haiku

Great Blue Heron

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
great blue heron,
 
the siege left behind,
 
is knee deep in sorrow
 
 
 
 
 
 



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4/5/6 syllables

Siege is a group of herons

Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry made of short, unrhymed lines that evoke natural imagery. The haiku gives a moment of insight based on observation.

Japanese haiku are written in 3 lines with 5/7/5 syllables form. In English is 3 lines with 17 syllables OR LESS due to the difference between Japanese and English syllables.

for haiku rules click here - modern Haiku rules

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