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Gogyohka 5 Lines Poem
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Tanka

Relentless Autumn Storm

by Gypsy Blue Rose


poem in black font in my author notes
 
 
 
relentless autumn storm

rages through Central Park

sweeping newspapers,

 wet cardboard, and work for food sign
 
tangled with gold and crimson leaves
 
 
 


 



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relentless autumn storm
rages through Central Park
sweeping news papers,
wet cardboard, and work for food sign
tangled with gold and crimson leaves

Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

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