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Wabi Sabi Tanka

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Clubs

Elder Woman

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Japanese Poetry Club, please check my author notes
 
 
 
elder woman

covered in summer rain

    beneath a silver moon —

in her wrinkled face

a life of beauty
 
 
 
 
 




WABI-SABI is a way of living that focuses on finding beauty within the imperfections of life and accepting peacefully the natural cycle of growth and decay. When the Japanese mend broken objects, they aggrandize the damage by filling the cracks with gold. They believe that when something's suffered damage and has a history it becomes more beautiful. ===
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Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem having about 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines and read in about two breaths in length when read aloud. The first poets who wrote tanka imitated the Japanese models of a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure in five lines. This resulted in poems that were too long in comparison to Japanese tanka. The first tanka were padded or chopped to meet the fixed number of syllables. Additionally, the third line must transition from the descriptive and image-focused beginning lines into a reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules
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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus

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Club entry for the "WABI-SABI POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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