General Poetry posted August 12, 2023


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as the days turn into night

The Night Sky

by BlueMarble

Days drift slowly by
The sun climbs across the sky
Then fades into night.
 
Evening's shadow falls
Calling for the moon to rise
Then fades into night.
 
Owl's soft voice is heard
Echoing 'neith the starlight
Then fades into night.
 

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Write a 5-7-5 Haiku Suite writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
In this this haiku suite, the final 5-syllabe line
, (satori) in each haiku must be the same. For example read my haiku suite "Just a Little Rain"
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sudden burst of wind
scatters the cherry blossoms
just a little rain

Geisha's umbrella
catches petals in the breeze
just a little rain

old woman cries as
pink showers evoke the past
just a little rain

Normally a haiku is nature related but feel free to choose your own topic.
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