General Poetry posted August 12, 2023


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Daily life

[relief for my feet]

by jaded831

waves inch on hot sands
I run in the cool ocean
relief for my feet

working at checkout
a cool tub of warm water
relief for my feet

chasing fast toddler
running all day I fall down
relief for my feet

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Write a 5-7-5 Haiku Suite writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
In this this haiku suite, the final 5-syllabe line
, (satori) in each haiku must be the same. For example read my haiku suite "Just a Little Rain"
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sudden burst of wind
scatters the cherry blossoms
just a little rain

Geisha's umbrella
catches petals in the breeze
just a little rain

old woman cries as
pink showers evoke the past
just a little rain

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