General Poetry posted August 6, 2023


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
it's not a poisonous beverage

Alcohol

by Johnny-artist

"Hey~ bishop Gary... is it OK?"
"There is no problem with near beer"
To discover Jesus~ thus
The wine from water~ proof
The loss?~ a weakness
To imbibe with
discomfort
Excess
Risk

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( a nonet poem )

Johnny-artist is a Mormon..
'The water into wine~ proof'~ (Biblical enlightenment; John 2:1-11)

Thanks MoonWillow for "From Grapes to Wine"..

Johnny
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