General Poetry posted August 5, 2023


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My idea of the coming of sorrows.

before the blood falls

by thoughtgame2

I am the carrier of this curse,
I did not! want it to hurt...
every loved one in my path,
even those i knew from birth!
 
When they look, I look away... 
as if i dont, know what they mean.
when they shout! i grow unworthy
and try my best, to leave the scene. 
 
Its important to my muse, that I... 
leave more  than i keep.
Another  form of forward motion
like a dog, that herds the sheep.
 
Far removed, from acts of glee...
from those composers of life to be!
No longer cuffed, around this tree...
i  look away. finally! allowed to flee!
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Post Number 100
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I have tried all my adult life to make it easier for those I deemed lost. Only to fail over and over again. Or am I looking at this wrong? Is it I that's lost? Only living will allow me to truly answer this question. Thank you fan story family once again for lending me an ear.
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