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3/7/7 Zen Haiku for the Haiku Club

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Clubs

Waves of Time

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Haiku Club, please check my author notes
 
 
 
waves of time

    ripple across the ocean —

eternity reaches land
 
 
 
 
 




This week we are learning about Zen Haiku. If you would like to join the Haiku Club click here Zen Haiku is the original haiku. Zen Buddhism is the philosophy that nature and humans are interconnected. Haiku Master, Matsuo Basho said, "to learn about trees, be a tree". Human suffering comes from the false feeling of being alone and disconnected. The truth is that we are all ONE.

HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It originated in the thirteenth century and was mastered a century later by Matsuo Basho. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI.. Haiku is about nature and it alludes to a season of the year. The haiku is written from an observer's point of view. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS because English syllables are longer than Japanese syllables. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation. Avoid metaphor and personification, you write about what you can SEE. === click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES === click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES === click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule === Modern Haiku

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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Club entry for the "ZEN HAIKU" event in "HAIKU CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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