Romance Poetry posted July 24, 2023 Chapters:  ...7 8 -9- 10... 


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Lost heart
A chapter in the book Passion For Poetry

Bewilder

by Lea Tonin1

A drowned fool's heart yells quiet words that should
leave my love to drift on a desert sea 
cast and hear myriad storms shrieking could
make deaf ears bend a vigorous plea
 
shredding softness blissfully streaming down
red armoured defence swiftly did vanquish
blistered heart beating a bewildered pound
banished the ghosts of old creeping anguish
 
I'm a feather and the cold winds' victim
riding terms of his disentanglement 
blindingly indulging his thankless whim
traitorous heart fracture made imminent.   
 
chattering cold the heat-searing pain blasts
in a place where hearts have thundered their last. 



Sonnet Poetry Contest contest entry


A first attempt... I hope you enjoy!


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