General Poetry posted June 16, 2023


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Oh you are ... are you?

I told myself

by JLR

 
You are the cheese in my pizza.
The sauce in my pasta.
The pepper in my sneeze.
The hiccup in my laughter.
 
You are the wind in my sail.
The wave in my surf.
The sand in my shoe.
The stain on my shirt.
 
You are the fire in my camp.
The marshmallow in my stick.
The burn on my tongue.
The smoke in my wick.
 
You’ll be the dream in my sleep.
The vision in my mind.
The snore in my nose.
The drool on my pillow.
 
 

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Write a humorous free verse or free style poem about YOU, as though you are talking to yourself! Recommended (but not required) that you start every stanza (except your last stanza) with "You are..." . You may start your last stanza with whatever you choose. Your poem can be of any length and genre.
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