Writing Poetry posted June 2, 2023 Chapters:  ...3 4 -5- 6... 


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A poem of how rot cant escape the light, even from the moon.
A chapter in the book Passion For Poetry

The Light The Rot

by Lea Tonin1

equine moon trotting 

dripping room rotting 




Two Line Poem contest entry


The poem is a metaphor and reflects the rotting of our society and all that we have lost as human beings. Ignoring our natural instincts of the barter system, helping of our neighbor no longer exists. The soul is give and take without expectations of something in return. We have lost a fundamental link to compassion which we all must have compassion and empathy.not sympathy. So for me this problem is symbolic of that
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