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triple rhymed whitney

A chapter in the book Learning To Fly

Lovely

by Debra White

 
 
Bleary eyed,
sunglasses on.
Unbrushed hair
slung in a bun.
Wearing clothes
from yesterday.
Lovely, lazy Saturday.
 
Headed out,
just Moll and me.
Took in all
the scenery.
Shared our smiles
with passers by.
Not a cloud was in the sky.
 
Carefree stride
and waggy tail.
Moll and me
retraced our trail.
Lady stopped
us, just to say -
"You look lovely!" - Made my day :)
 
 




Saturday 27th May 2023

When I got up yesterday morning, Molly was desperate to go for her walk, so I threw on some clothes, tied up my hair, popped my sunglasses on and took her straight out.

It was such a lovely, sunny morning that there were already a few people out and about at 8am. Everyone was so smiley and cheerful.

On our way back home, a lady that I vaguely know called over to say good morning and told me that I looked lovely! What a gorgeous start to the day!

Whitney - a seven line poem with a syllable count of 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 respectively.

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